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Ahhhh the contrast and the soft shading is really nice mhhhmmm ; u ; i looove this
The majority of the black really leads a hand in making the face a focal point
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Next, the proportions in the face feel very 'off' to me. Wilde had a long face, to be sure, but this doesn't look exaggerated so much as wrong. I'd say his eyes are too high, and the edges of his face are not parallel enough (too curvy/wide near his cheekbones, particularly on the left side). Work on keeping his face shape a little more symmetrical, and play around with the eye placement a bit.
If there is one think I'd suggest for improvement, I would encourage just a little bit more shading on the hand holding the cane. As it is, it looks a little flat in comparison to the rest of the picture.
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